tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8058257571855100534.post4532129227797408527..comments2023-05-23T09:07:04.444-05:00Comments on Jamie Barbour's EDM 310 Class Blog: Project #9 Progress ReportJamie Lynn Barbourhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13164895598166045049noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8058257571855100534.post-83450213818867108932013-03-19T11:48:45.701-05:002013-03-19T11:48:45.701-05:00Jamie, you seem to be a very passionate leader wit...Jamie, you seem to be a very passionate leader with lots of motivation behind you! This is a very well thought-out blog post, in my opinion. I like what you said about reading hard-copy books. Although I am in full support of technology expansion in schools and breaking tradition for the good of the future of our students, and I do still like to read a normal book every now and then. My eyes also hurt a little after spending hours on a laptop, as well, so I know how you feel there. This post was great, but there are a few slight grammatical errors that I noticed. A few times I saw sentences that needed comma splices and a few run-on sentences. I also once saw where you meant to type "about" and typed "amount" instead. These are extremely easy errors to make, and I have made plenty of them myself! I know that I suggest this idea to other people a lot, but it really does help. If I were you, I would get someone to proofread my posts before I published them. You mentioned that you get a headache after staring at screens for a long period of time. I can be the same way sometimes, and therefore don't always notice the mistakes I make unless someone with better eyesight at the moment points them out. I just suggest this because I know that it has definitely helped me before, and I think it can help all of us from making minor mistakes. Otherwise, you made some very valid points, and you seem to have a huge heart for you future classrooms. Keep up the momentum! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07402997609226542239noreply@blogger.com